BR2-16: A Night Out

Rudy and Raf walked into the school dance. There were lots of kids inside. But no one was dancing.
 

I read "A Night Out. " It is a story about the school dance. On Friday night, the school dance is held. Raf and Rudy go to the school hall. There are kid in big group and kids in little group. Some of them are laughing the others are shouting over the music. Some are eating and drinking but no one is dancing. Rudy wants to dance and she grabs Raf's hand. She takes him out into the middle of the room. Raf doesn' want to dance because nobody is dancing. He doesn't want to be laughted by other kids. But Rudy says "Don't think about them!" She wants to be fun with Raf. Ruf is afraid that he will be alone if he is dancing with Rudy. Rudy says "You won't be alone! I'll be with you." After that Rudy starts dancing and she doesn't look at other kids. She is fun. Raf is starts dancing and he is fun, too. The others look at Rudy and Raf. All the kids are coming over to dance with them. They are all having fun. No one looking at Raf.

Reilly, Carmel (2006). A Night Out, Thomson Nelson (216/6580 words)